Tuesday, June 19, 2012

CHAPTER 1


Meet Fifty Shades Continued

Chapter 1


Miss Anastasia Steele rings me. And I can’t believe how fucking happy about it I am. What am I, a fourteen year old adolescent or something?

“Er... we’d like to go ahead with the photo shoot for the article,” she tells me in a breathy, nervous little voice.  “Tomorrow if that’s okay. Where would be convenient for you, sir?”

Just hearing her call me ‘Sir’ over the phone does things to me, but I manage to keep my usual cool and suggest that we meet at The Heathman at nine thirty the following morning.

Hell, I can stay in Portland a bit longer, I can work from here and get Taylor and Andrea to organise things for me– that’s their job.

I try to convince myself that maybe seeing little Miss Steele again will help rid me of this annoying and inconvenient obsession for her that I seem to have developed, but the truth is I just can’t help myself. I have to see her again.
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And it’s still there. I feel it as we shake hands when we meet up the following morning. That electricity humming between us. What is that all about? But as we touch I know she feels it too, because her breathing becomes erratic and she blushes that sexy shade of pink that I’m becoming all too familiar with. I’d like to see her ass that shade of pink after I’ve spanked the shit out of her. Asking me if I was gay indeed, how fucking dare she.

Anastasia introduces me to Katherine Kavanagh. Jeez, I’m glad it wasn’t her that fell into my office. Oh sure, she’s attractive in the conventional way, but she doesn’t interest me in the slightest. And she’s bossy and controlling in a way that I find most unpleasant in a woman.

No, I’d much rather look at little Miss Steele any day of the week.

Especially as she is wearing tight skinny jeans which showcase that delectable ass of hers, oh and those long luscious legs… and as for her perfect tits in that tight t shirt…Christ what I could do to her…

But then I am most displeased when I see the look that passes between Anastasia and the photographer guy, Jose Rodriguez. I hope Welch hasn’t cocked up with his security check and missed that she has a boyfriend. I’m gonna be well pissed with him if he has.

Shit, photographer guy really wants into her panties big time. He can sure as hell just fuck off.


JOSE

“Where would you like me?” I ask him coolly, and from his look he knows exactly what I’m threatening him with. He really doesn't want to mess with me if he knows what’s good for him.




But then bossy Katherine Kavanagh takes over to organise the photo shoot, and some stupid fucker blinds me with lights – this is what comes of dealing with stupid little amateurs I guess, and serves me right for agreeing to this shoot.

But I play nice, because it means I get to look at Anastasia for the next twenty minutes or so. Crap, she is so shy that I only manage to catch her eye twice in all that time, so it’s real hard to try and assess if it's worth me trying to set things up with her.

Could she really be my new submissive? Training her to my own singular tastes would be so arousing… Hell, I really want her, so I’ve just got to give it a shot. And because I’m used to getting my own way all of the time, failure is not an option.


“Will you walk with me, Miss Steele?” I ask her as the photo shoot finally comes to an end.

She is clearly very surprised by my request, so it seems she has no idea that I find her attractive. So naïve, so appealing.

The photographer guy is not at all happy when she quickly agrees, and as I hold the door open for her to leave with me, he scowls fiercely. Tough shit boy.

Christ but she fidgets so nervously as she stands there, and I get an immediate hard on as I picture all the possible means that I could employ to cure that. Oh yeah, get her tightly bound up and then maybe use the crop, the flogger, or even a paddle… but I mustn’t get ahead of myself. She may run a hundred miles when she gets a hint of what I want from her. But I can’t let that happen, I just can’t.

I wait for Taylor to follow us out. His face is as impassive as ever, but I know he must be curious as to why I'm breaking with my normal protocol for selecting a new sub by actively pursuing this particular little brown haired girl - he’s seen enough of them over the years that he’s worked for me to know how things usually work. But of course he knows better than to ask any questions.

“I’ll call you, Taylor,” I quietly instruct him, and he disappears towards the exit.

“I wonder if you would join me for coffee this morning,” I ask Anastasia, as I carefully study her to gauge her reaction, unable to resist staring at her beautiful face. Oh those stunning blue eyes, no wonder I’ve been dreaming about them every night. I’ve never seen such amazing color eyes before. I’ve always selected subs with brown eyes.

She looks completely astounded and shocked by my request.

“I have to drive everyone home,” she finally mutters as she nervously twists her fingers again.

Shit! She’s turning me down? No, no way! I’m not having this.

“TAYLOR.” I call him back.

“Are they university based?” I ask. When she just quietly nods, I tell her that Taylor will take her friends back and quickly instruct him accordingly. Problem sorted.  Now she can have coffee with me.

But instead she frowns at me, and for one dreadful minute I think she is going to turn me down – again.


But then she comes up with her own solution. She will swap cars with her friend Kate. So she does want to go on a date with me. I am stupidly, ridiculously pleased by this, and I give her one of my best winning smiles as I let her back into the room to arrange things with her friend.

After what seems like an age, she finally reappears.

“Okay, let’s do coffee,” she whispers as she looks at me shyly and flushes deeply yet again. I just wish I knew exactly what she,s thinking to make her blush that way – intriguing.

“After you, Miss Steele,” I grin at her, letting her go ahead of me so that I can enjoy the way her perfect little ass moves as she walks.

Christian Grey, CEO of Grey Enterprises, and BDSM Dominant Supreme, has never gone on a date to get a new submissive before. But for this alluring and fascinating creature that seems to have completely beguiled me, I am going on a date. 

Bring it on.

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As we walk down the hotel corridor together, I gently start my interrogation of Miss Steele. I need to find out how involved she is with her friends and family to assess whether there could be any problems with her embracing the lifestyle that comes with being my sub.

“How long have you known Katherine Kavanagh?”

Clearly the tenacious Miss Kavanagh has considerable influence over her, as she managed to convince her to drive all the way from Portland to Seattle stand in for her to interview me – thank Christ she did.

“Since our freshman year. She’s a good friend.”

“Hmm.”

She could be a problem, as I expect my subs to devote every weekend to me, not to ‘friends’. They have to be available for sex whenever, however I want it. That’s the deal. And usually I want it a lot. I most certainly will with Miss Steele.

I press the call button for the elevator, and as the doors open they reveal a young couple in a passionate clinch, who quickly jump apart guiltily.

I can see that Anastasia is blushing again and struggling to hide a smile as she peeks up at me through her lashes. God, she looks so adorable when she does that.

As we reach the ground floor and the doors open, I take her hand to lead her out. I find I really like the feel of her much smaller hand in mine.

As we hear the young couple in the elevator giggling as we walk away, I can’t help smiling.

“What is it about elevators?” I murmur, but the truth is I understand only too well how the confined space of the elevator serves to magnify sexual attraction.

We head out of the hotel and turn left towards the Portland Coffee House which I know is nearby thanks to some quick research by Taylor. I make sure we avoid the revolving doors, because then I would have to let go of her hand, and I don’t want to let it go. Miss Steele appears to be happy, as I see her fighting to prevent a smile from breaking across her face. I’d like to see that smile in full. I already know she has a heart stopping smile.


We walk four blocks to the coffee shop, and I suggest she chooses a table while I get the drinks. She takes me by surprise with her choice of beverage – English breakfast tea, bag out. She informs she’s not keen on coffee. Surely everyone drinks coffee? 

Her eyes widen when I ask her whether she wants sugar, and then she looks down at her fingers shyly and declines anything to eat. What is she thinking?

I know she’s checking me out as I stand in line waiting to be served. That’s cool, no problem. I’ve little doubt she likes what she sees. And I sure as hell like what I see as I join her at the table. She’s deep in thought and unconsciously biting her bottom lip which I find that incredibly erotic.

“Penny for your thoughts?” I startle her, and yet again she blushes. I hope that means she is having erotic thoughts about me too. I wish I could be sure though, this girl is such an enigma. I’m more used to women falling over themselves to get close to me.

As I hand her the tea, she still hasn’t answered me, so I prompt her again.

“Your thoughts?”

“This is my favourite tea,” she replies evasively, indicating the Twining’s English Breakfast tea bag.

No, she’s not giving anything away, not opening up to me at all, frustrating little creature that she is. I watch as she dips the tea bag into the teapot and then fishes it out almost straight away.

“I like my tea black and weak,” she explains as she sees my puzzled look.

Right, time to cut to the chase and find out what I need to know.




“I see. Is he your boyfriend?” I need to establish for certain that she is definitely single. I don’t share.

“Who?”

“The photographer. Jose Rodriguez.”

“No. Jose’s a good friend of mine, that’s all. Why did you think he was my boyfriend?”

“The way you smiled at him, and he at you.”

I look her straight in the eye to check she’s not lying about this. I'd know. I’m an expert in this, it’s one of the reasons why I'm so successful. I know when people are bullshitting me.

“He’s more like family,” she assures me, and I believe her. Good.

She watches as I peel back the paper on my blueberry muffin. I think about what else I’d like to peel back – all her clothes, so that I could gaze freely on that lush body of hers.

“Do you want some?” I offer, but she declines.

“And the boy I met yesterday, at the store. He’s not your boyfriend?” Best check to be completely sure.

She seems slightly irritated as she answers me this time.

“No. Paul’s just a friend. I told you yesterday. Why do you ask?”

“You seem nervous around men,” I state.

“I find you intimidating,” she retorts, as she flushes deeply again. I’m taken aback by this surprisingly candid answer, but I find I rather like this honesty. Perhaps I’ve underestimated Miss Steele.

“You should find me intimidating. You’re very honest. Please don’t look down. I like to see your face.” I smile encouragingly at her and now it’s her turn to look surprised. “It gives me some clue as to what you might be thinking. You’re a mystery, Miss Steele.”

“There’s nothing mysterious about me,” she snorts in disbelief.

“I think you’re very self-contained,” I comment. Yes, she doesn't give much away. “Except when you blush of course, which is often. I just wish I knew what you were blushing about.”

Oh Miss Steele, I really hope it’s because just like me, you're having some seriously dirty thoughts fantasizing about me fucking you in every possible position.

“Do you always make such personal observations?”

“I hadn’t realized I was. Have I offended you?” I’m surprised by her honesty again. She is quite a courageous little thing under that shy exterior. Much to my surprise, I find this intriguing, so refreshing after all the ‘yes’ women I always have around me.

“No,” she replies. “But you're very high handed.”

There it is again, that audacious streak. No one usually dares to pick me up about my behavior, and I feel slightly ashamed to think that perhaps I’ve upset her.

“I’m used to getting my own way Anastasia, in all things,” I offer by way of explanation.

“I don’t doubt it. Why haven’t you asked me to call you by your first name?”

She seems genuinely pissed by this. Well of course, if I have my way, she will be calling me ‘Sir’ or ‘Master’, but we haven’t got to that part of things yet have we? So for now I just explain.

“The only people who use my given name are my family and a few close friends. That’s the way I like it.” I can hardly acknowledge to her how hearing her say my name as she left my office last week has stayed in my mind to taunt me.

Enough of all this, I won’t have her defying me. I'm the one in control here. I steer the conversation round to ask about her family. I need to know if any close family associations could present an obstacle to her being my sub every weekend, but nothing that I manage to prise out of her gives me any great cause for concern. 

She doesn't give much away, but I’m surprised to learn that she chose to live with her step-dad rather than her mom when she was fifteen. Hmm, she must be pretty close to him then. Her mom seems a bit ditzy if she’s on her fourth marriage. I don’t detect that trait in Anastasia.

Now she turns the tables and asks about my family, and I very briefly fill her in, but I didn't come here to talk about them with her. They are of no concern to a sub.

Then we talk about travelling abroad – she has never left mainland USA, and I find myself imagining showing her places like France and England when I see the way her face lights up as she becomes animated on the subject of Shakespeare and Hardy. But just as she is beginning to open up a little bit, she calls time on our date. No!

“I’d better go. I have to study,” she informs me as she glances at her watch.

“For your exams?”

“Yes, they start Tuesday.”

I suppose it wouldn’t be fair to try and argue with her to make her stay a bit longer. These exams are important to her, I understand and respect that. I offer to walk her back to the hotel parking lot where Miss Kavanagh’s car is. 

But at least nothing I’ve learnt this morning has given me any cause to discount the possibility of recruiting her as my new sub. That thought makes me happy and I smile at her, thinking of how much fun it will be to train her for the role. Oh yes indeed, fettering, flogging and fucking the delectable Miss Steele in my playroom. Fucking her very hard indeed. Stop it Grey, you’re getting way ahead of yourself again.

But I can’t help thinking about the clothes that I would like to see her wearing, rather than the cheap crap she usually dresses in. I’d really like to see her in a low cut silk blouse, with a tight pencil skirt and 'fuck me' sky high heels – Louboutins are the shoe of choice for my subs, and with those gorgeous long legs of hers... hmm, she would look stunning.

“Do you always wear jeans?” I ask her.

“Mostly” she confirms.

I thought as much. Well that means no one else will get to see her dressed as she really ought to be. I can take care of her wardrobe to suit my tastes.


We’re nearly back at the hotel, when she blurts out,

“Do you have a girlfriend?”

What? Well I suppose I have asked her all about her boyfriends. But she really has no idea about me does she? So innocent, so naïve.

“No, Anastasia. I don’t do the girlfriend thing,” I inform her gently and see her look of confusion.

Is that what she thought this ‘date’ was all about? Holy shit, of course she did. I can see by her embarrassed look that I’m right and now she can’t make her escape quickly enough. In her hurry she trips and stumbles headlong into the road, and I see a cyclist making straight for her as he heads the wrong way up this one way street.

“Shit, Anna!” I tug her hand so that she falls against me as the cyclist shoots past.

Before I know it, I’m holding her tightly against my chest, and I’m instantly overwhelmed by how fantastic it feels to have her in my arms, as I discover that she smells wonderful, especially her hair. I hold her close as I trace the perfect soft skin of her face to make sure she is unhurt. I nearly groan out load as my thumb traces over that beautiful mouth of hers – that bottom lip that she bites enticingly so often is so soft and alluring.




“Are you okay?” I whisper, and as she looks at me, she stares longingly at my mouth, and I know that she really wants me to kiss her. In fact she is practically begging me to kiss her. And I really, really want to, I’m breathless with need, but then I look into those wonderful, innocent blue eyes of hers, and when they seem to see right into me, into the very blackness of my soul, I come to my senses.

What am I doing for Christ’s sake, messing with this beautiful, sweet, innocent young girl? She deserves a far better man than a fucked up individual like me. What have I been thinking? Do I not have a decent bone in my body?  I shake my head to pull myself together, to try to break the spell that this bewitching female seems to have cast over me.

“Anastasia, you should steer clear of me. I’m not the man for you,” I manage to whisper. “Breathe, Anastasia, breathe. I’m going to stand you up and let you go.”

I can see she is upset, really upset by my apparent rejection of her. We both know that she was crying out for me to kiss her, and yet I didn’t. I hold her at arm’s length to make sure she is not going to faint or anything else stupid. 

“I’ve got this,” she insists, clearly mortified now. “Thank you.”

“For what?” I ask, still holding her shoulders to support her. What is she thanking me for – not leading her down the dark path to BDSM? For coming to my senses in time?

“For saving me.”

“That idiot was riding the wrong way. I’m glad I was here. I shudder to think what could have happened to you. Do you want to come and sit down in the hotel for a moment?”

As I let her go, she shakes her head, before wrapping her arms around herself, and quickly crossing the road to the hotel, while I follow behind her.

Outside the hotel, she turns and faces me, but cannot look me in the eye.

“Thanks for the tea and doing the photo shoot,” she murmurs, clearly still upset and humiliated by the turn of events between us.

I feel like a complete shit, and struggle to say something to her, something that will explain that I am doing this for her own good, despite the fact that she calls to me on some deep level in a way that I have never experienced in my life before. But no words can explain or excuse my behavior. I want to make you into my submissive sex slave. It’s better for you this way.

“What, Christian?” she snaps at me.

What can I say?

“Good luck with your exams,” is the only thing I finally come up with.

She looks at me with disgust and skepticism.

“Thanks,” she says sarcastically. “Goodbye Mr Grey.”

With that she turns on her heel and disappears towards the underground garage.

I am left in anguish, feeling so confused and bereft at having allowed Miss Anastasia Steele to walk out of my life.

I take out my cell to call Taylor to come and get me, wondering how the fuck I am ever going to get this woman out of my head.


I don’t own any of the Fifty Shades Trilogy or the characters therein. They belong to E L James. I’m just borrowing them for fun and not for profit. Please refer to the Legal’s page for further details. This work is not to be copied or reproduced in any way without permission. 

169 comments:

  1. So glad to see your story is back up! I hope you plan to continue writing! ((Please don't leave us hanging!)) x

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    1. Thanks for finding your way here. I'm planning to update first chance I get now that I've got this blog set up xxx

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    2. Plse carry on, i want more. X

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    3. wow that was fab...please carry on with it x

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    4. You have done a great job! I look forward to the rest of the chapters.

      Elbowroom

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    5. WOW, this is just what I needed. This story has me so captivated. I was suffereing from withdrawal symptoms after reading it three times. I plan to read it again and enjoy your blogs.

      El

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    6. Loved your story. Please continue...I'm captivated by your words. Thanks

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  2. This is fantastic story! Please keep writing!

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    1. I'm glad you made your way to this blog. It's everyone's wonderful support that keeps me writing. :)

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    2. Wow 1st chapter was AMAZING! found this blog on FB.Im hooked!

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  3. loved it! Would love to read more! Well done!

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    1. Thanks for your comments. More to come as soon as I get a chance now :)

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  4. Hi there Anonymous,
    Sorry to have been a bit slow in replying, my bad! Glad you have found your way to this blog. Did you manage to access all of the chapters ok?
    I will be updating here in the near future :)
    Thanks again xxx

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  5. This is amazing! I just finished the trilogy and wanted to know everything from Christian's POV. Please keep writing!

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    1. Hi there. It is certainly interesting looking at things from Christian's pov isn't it? Hoping to update soon.xxx

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  6. Wow... I must say.. after Fifty Shades... this looks like that its definitely most certainly going to be my new drug.... thank you for writing this.. :)

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    1. Hi Mridul. Oh dear, I hope I'm not responsible for an addiction :) Thanks for finding my blog. xxx

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  7. I want to make a constructive comment. You know I love this story, and have been writing to you all along about the british-isms in EL's work, and in yours. You really do write more American than she does. Well I was just checking to see if you had added on to his story, and I reread chapter one. I'm reading all the longing and the magnetic kind of pull that Christian feels for her...as if it's something deeper than just a sub...I think you need to put that into him in some of the later chapters. I mean I know he's falling in love with her because I read the original...but I want you to make me believe he's falling in love with her. But I am perfectly happy with your story as it is...I was just trying to be constructive. It's all up to what you want. :) Krystyne

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    1. Hi Krystyne. It's great to get constructive criticism! All I can say is patience my dear! The way I'm thinking is that Christian doesn't believe he is capable of love, so is fighting his feelings. But events overtake him shortly, meaning he has to confront his feelings and accept them.
      Good fun, isn't it?
      Thanks for all your help with British-isms too :)

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    2. Both the original comment and the reply from our author here have given me food for thought for the next few days! As much as I enjoyed the romance between our star crossed lovers, I am so happy to hear that there are others who have been looking beyond that aspect and diving deeper into the psychological aspects of the story line. Don't misunderstand me, I love E.L. Jame's steamy scenes just as much as the next girl, but I could have fallen even harder for Mr. Grey had we known the extent to which he tortures himself inside, intellectually and emotionally.

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    3. I agree with Rachel here..the steamy scenes are wonderful-from Ana's perspective-but we know that men look at attraction, love and sex with a totally different eye. You've certainly done well so far with Christian's visual ques and description but it would be "completing the picture" if you could relate Christian's thinking and visualizations to his history with the other subs and even farther back to Elena and her influence on the young and innocent 17 year old. This could potentially be a finishing touch for explaining why he is "fifty shade of fucked up" Maybe the good Dr should have some added contribution too!

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  8. So happy to see you were able to put the story up! I am really enjoying reading Christians point of view!! Keep up the good work :)

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    1. Glad you found your way here, and glad that you're enjoying it :)

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  9. This is wonderful. Excited that I have many chapters to catch up, on. Fantastic writing.

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    1. Hope you've caught up now ready for the next update :)

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  10. I was so sad when I had finished the trilogy, now I found your story - and I feel like I`m in heaven :) Thank you so much for writing this, it is awesome, you get the core of the characters so well!

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    1. Hi there. Nice to hear that you are enjoying my writing. :)

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  11. I found this through a link on Facebook - OMG what an amazing job you've done - I love that we get to read the story from Christian's side. On to the next chapter :)

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  12. Hi auto_meiser. Glad you found your way to my blog, by whatever method. Hope you enjoy the rest of it. xxx

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  13. Absolutelt faantastic!!! You matched the two stories perfectly. Can't wait to read more :) Thank you

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  14. Omg I'm impatient waiting for chater 21 and the end can't wait

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  15. I just finished book number three and stumbled upon this! I am thrilled just like the others to have this to enjoy!

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  16. Have just found my way here from ff.net
    I'm looking forward to reading your story. Too erotic for ff can only mean great things!

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  17. Omg I can't wate till u write mour

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  18. omg im lov,n this . thank you 4 write,n this so fab , lov the books and it nice 2 read sumfin from christians pont ov veiw , im just lov,n it xxx

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  19. Would love to read it all from Christians poine of view xxx

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  20. lovin this!! its fab, cant wait 2 read more xxx

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  21. Fantastic....looking forward to the next installments :)

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  22. I found this through a link on Facebook. So excited to read the rest! Keep up the writing :-) xx

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  23. I too found this link through Facebook and it's amazing! Well done keep up the good work :-) xx

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  24. wow this is great, ive loved reading thank you xx

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  25. Thisssssssssss is so delicious! OMG! You have embodied and captured the spirit of Christian, in fact, I've gotta ask, ARE. YOU. CHRISTIAN. GREY??? (smiles)

    I'm so turned on by Christian's 'private' thoughts ... More, please!

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    1. Haha, I wish I had Christian's millions, rather than just an over active imagination!

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  26. brilliant cant get enough keep it up we want MORE xxx

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  27. Is it only the one chapter that you've written so far? Its fab :)

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    1. No, there are 21 chapters so far. Click on the 'June' part of Blog content on the left hand side of the blog, and the other chapters will drop down :)

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  28. Fabulous! Are you going to continue writing after finishing writing Fifty Shades of Grey in Christian's POV?

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    1. I'm still contemplating how far to take this, whether to stick to the canon or go au at some point to bring something new to the mix. But I intend to carry on writing for the foreseeable future anyway :)

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  29. I have found your blog from a forum that i frequent and i want to say this is fantastic..... i look forward to a cuppa and a read later!

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    1. Hi there, hope you have a great cuppa to go with your reading. Can I ask what forum it is you frequent? You can reply to my email address if you prefer. xx

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  30. I totally love your blog. I have felt totally bereft since completing the trilogy for the 4th time!! I just can't get enough of Christian, always needy for more!! I recommended this site to fellow forum members who also can't get enough and everyone has nothing but fantastic reviews!! You have filled a huge void that was left at the end of the books - so thank you so very much and I wait in anticipation of your continued updates!! xXx

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  31. I totally love this its great to read this from Christians pov, I truely love the trilogy..... The morning after i finished freed, I woke to horrible feeling of being lost without him.... You have filled the void for me thank you x

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  32. Okay let me just say this, we need MORE!!!!!! Please you have to do the series in this format, from Christian's point of view..... I know I'm speaking for all my fellow Christian Lovers. I can't get enough......I've read all 3 books 3 times already and am about to start my 4th time reading them and just like Anonymous above me I feel her pain.......totally lost without him :-(!!!!!

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    1. Thanks for your support - I'm working on chapter 22 at the moment :)

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  33. I am so pleased to have found this blog, I can't wait to read your other chapters :) I was so sad to finish Fifty Shade Freed because I became totally obsessed with Christian an Ana so I'm over the moon that someone has continued on and written from Christian's POV! Great work :)

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  34. Love it! I was going to reread the book but this is so much better! Thx!

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  35. I'm so pleased to get this blog going :) was so disappointed when it just disappeared :(:( anyways I've got it back now and just by reading this first chapter I just know I am going to enjoy reading your version of "Mr Greys " side of it all Mmmmmmmmm lol Thank u ; - )

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  36. Love it! Need more Christian! So upsetvthat they took down update. Will keep eye out for any new stuff you have to share. You're a brilliant writer also and wish you the best of luck with your new book :)

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    1. Thanks for that - new book is coming along slowly :)

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  37. Love it, keep writing x

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  38. Im so happy readin this, found my self wantin more after i finish'd all 3 books. Lovin readin from Christian's point ov view.

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    1. thank u thank u.. I read it by his word..u made my day..

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  41. hi, I'm late to this blog but I was wondering if you actually did a chapter one in your point of view??

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  42. Love the books!

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  43. Loving this...just read paragraph of the book against paragraph of your work on the coffee morning. Love how she wonders if avoiding the revolving door is to keep holding her hand, and then you confirm it from his end. Or, he wonders what she's thinking here, and in the book, you see what she's thinking, and vice versa. Such a blast! I did the same thing with the last two chapters from Freed that started out with his point of view. Which I found far more erotic, but no wonder, she's just a smitten kitten on her end, but he's got his sensual little schemes and dirty thoughts that makes it all much racier, lol...but also, more emotionally gripping, as you see already he doesn't think that much of himself. Just great adaptation you've done here, already read it once, will read it all over again ;-).

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  44. OMG please hurry and release the books, I've read all of 50 shades of grey deeper and freed several times, I really want Christians versions now, and reading this blog I WANT THEM BOOKS NOW!!! Lol. God I'm so hungry for them. ;-) xxxx

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  45. Is This Where You First Start? And Not The Interview Part? I'm New To This!

    Thank You!

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  46. Oh Yes, You're Right =D! I'm So Sorry! Thank You!

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  47. OMG sooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. Thanks so much. Can't wait to keep reading...

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  48. wow i love this please continue with it x it is fab x ty x

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  49. Love this,first time here,are there photos?

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  50. U r a awesome writer?

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  51. Omg thank you! Now i have more to read since i finished the series yesterday!

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  52. I wish you would finish the rest of the story! Also the other two books! I've really enjoy reading it! I hope you do it soon!

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  53. I just finished the third book and was happy to stumble across this from a friend's link. I love your version of Christian's point of view. I think before you submit your blogs of the chapters that you reread it and check your spelling. Just a little help there, but love the writing so continue.

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  54. Are these only on your blog? or can i download them somewhere to read on my tablet when im off line?

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  55. ohhhh loved readin that cant wait to read more now :)

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  56. AWESOME WRITING, I was ready to flip to the next page as if were my kindle lol!!!

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  57. This is wonderful! Can't wait to read more.

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  58. I didnt think I was going to be interested in reading this story from Christians point of view but this is AWESOME. I can't wait to read more. Thanks!

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  60. I just found your blog, I love it , please keep it up, it is great.!

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  61. omg thank you i need more please xx

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  62. loved it keep it up cant wait to read more x

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  63. please keep writing, great job! i hope to see more!

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  64. Please do the whole trilogy.. PLEEEAAAASSSSEEE :)

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  65. I'm hoping to start reading tomorrow... I can't wait heard it is really good...

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  66. Appreciate it for this post, I am a big fan of this website would like to keep updated.

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  67. Sooooooo glad I came across your blog!! This is exactly what I was needing. Your writing is amazing please keep it coming!

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  68. You're doing a fantastic job already. Why stop there? Go further back to when Christian & Elena first started their relationship! And how Christian first got started with HIS subs. I bet you could come up with something REALLY intriguing on his very own first sub!
    I'm hooked BTW!!!

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  69. Loved this!! I was so looking forward to more and now I am able to get a glimpse of what was left off

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  70. Is there an app for this?!

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  71. I'm am loving this trilogy and to read it from his side is awesome! I love to read a story that you can feel all the emotions! Keeps me wanting More! Doing a super job keep them coming!

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  72. Wow! Just...wow ^_^ Thumbs up!
    I'm glad I found your blog and I'm really happy you are doing this :D
    I'm supporting you now and telling some of my friends about this blog if you don't mind. This is great! hahaha

    Keep it up!
    ~MV

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  73. wow the books had me giggling and very excited at times and was sad once i had finished.. but a friend of mine told me about this site so here i am feeling very excited again.. lol i look forward to reading more xxxx

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  74. Just learned about this site - love it! Can't wait to read more!

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  75. OMG love it please keep writing :) made my day... Love hearing it from Christians point of view. Thank u

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  76. you write very well..im impressed!

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  77. I would love it more if you kinda. . .uhm, smaller the font? (^^;)

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    1. Ah, now that's a tricky one - other people have asked me to make it large. So who to please?

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  78. Brilliant. Just what I need to feed my CG withdrawal. Please please don't stop!

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  79. This is the 50th time???? I read this blog. Starting from begning. Loving it.
    Kim

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  80. OMG! That's awesome!!! Thanks for doing this! Hugs from Brazil!

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  81. that was amazing wanted it to go on and on thankyou

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  82. THANK YOU FOR FULFILLING OUR FIFTY SHADES OBSESSION :)
    LATERS BABY

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  83. Hola, tendrías a alguien que sepa español para poder hacer una buena traducción? La automática es muy mala, y realmente somos muchas las chicas de habla hispana que nos interesaría leer lo que escribes (españa, mexico, chile, argentina, uruguay, venezuela, etc.) Me encantaría leerlo en mi idioma, y no la mala copia de Gisela Castro.

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    1. I'd love to have a proper translator, but sadly I don't have anyone that I can ask at the moment. Never say never though!

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  84. I'm going through 50 Shades withdrawal so your blog fills the void so much. Thanks and continue writing. My only dissatisfaction is the picture of Christian Grey. I believe that Matt Homer represent Christian the best. He is sexy in a classy kind of way and has intense, searing eyes. I hope he will play Christian in the movie. What'd you think?

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  85. THIS BLOG IS FANTASTIC...I AM ADDICTED TO THIS AS MUCH AS I WAS TO FIFTY SHADES....PLEASE KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING....I LOVE ALL THE CHAPTERS FROM CHRISTIAN AND GRACE'S POINT OF VIEW!!!!!

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  86. Loving this from Savannah, GA!

    I've forwarded this to my friends!!

    Oh yeah, when it comes to their wedding, the bar fight in Aspen, and Jack Hyde getting his ass knocked out in the Grey's apartment, can you go into more detail than EL James? She made them too quick. :(

    Thanks again for the awesome writing!!!

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  87. Wow amazing!! I just finished the trilogy and I heard about your blog and came searching for you. Glad I found you, really!
    Good Idea it was to write this from Christian Grey's view!
    I ve just read the first chapter and its simply amazing, really good stuff!
    I will for sure contine to read this!
    Thanks for writing this!
    Keep up the Good work!!!!

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  88. New to your site. I've been reading with Jane and the master blogger. Great to read Christian's version. I'm hooked!

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  89. Wow, départ fracassant!

    Traducteur Google directement sur votre page, c'est la première fois que je vois cela, bravo!

    Montréal, Quebec
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  90. J'ai remarqué la photo de José... Avez-vous lu MOTU sur le net?

    Fleur50
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    c.gareau@hotmail.com

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  91. Bonjour, et bienvenue Fleur. Il est très agréable d'avoir un locuteur français commentant sur ​​mon blog, et je suis heureux d'entendre que vous trouvez utile Google Translate :)

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    1. Il est pratique... sauf quand je lis sur mon iPad, il ne fonctionne pas. Heureusement que je peux aller sur mon ordinateur portable pour lire ou copier/coller et envoyer le chapitre par courriel sur le ipad.

      Fleur50

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  92. Are these chapters exactly like the real book or did you change them up!

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  93. I've been late to the party, I've just read the books by EL James, and reread them. Now I found 3 blogs that feed my obsession. www.christiangrey50shades.blogspot.co.uk, wwww.craziemazie.blogspot.co.uk, and www.fifty-shades-of-grey.me But there aren;t enough!! Does anyone have other sites that are worth reading??

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  94. I am sooooo glad I found your blog!! I love the relationship between christan and ana. The longing, needing that person like u need the air u breath! U are doing an amazing job with christians pov. Thank you thank you!! Please dont stop writing...

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  95. I just found this blog. I've read all Fifty Shades, and I Loved Them All!!!! I started reading them back in Oct. and I know I've them all like ten times if not more. I'm not a big reader but I just can't seemed to put the books down! I hope that you do finish the book through Christian mind. I love reading what his thoughts are! I would like to know is, When is the Movie coming out lol, and is the movie going to involve all 3 books or is it going to be 3 different movies?

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  96. wish i had the books. havent even read them. =( really want to tho.

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    1. if you haven't read the Grey books...you SHOULD NOT START with this blog....read the books FIRST!

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  97. I read this again today.....I can never get enough!

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  98. I lost count how many times I read again. Thank you.
    Kim

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  99. I'm a little late to the party, but I just found your blog and I'm already loving it! Would you consider making a downloadable version of the books for us ereaders? That would be awesomeeeee!!! Love your work!

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  100. Copiones!!!!!! esta no es la oficial roba paginas de facebook!!!

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  101. read again....can never get enough. (sigh)

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  102. I just found your blog and I can't get enough! Ty

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  103. Can someone tell me if the blogs first chapter is suppose to start with Ana calling Christian for the photoshoot

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  104. Hey. Me and my friend love your blog. But i was wondering why chapter 1 starts when Christian is agreeing to the photo shoot. I wanted to re-read how he meets Ana. Can you do something about please. I really want to re-read the first few chapters.

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    1. Well, ELJ wrote those first couple of chapters from Christian's pov right at the end of 'Freed', and so I'm just picking up to continue where she left off.

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  105. Hi there, I've just started reading your blog. Very interesting take on the story. I look forward to reading much more xxxx

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  106. hi, I just saw your blog today and I need so many catching up. Just reading this first chapter is so great its like reading the continuance of EL James novels. You're very good. Thanks so much.

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  107. Back to read your Christian pov from the beginning. .... again. You do a great job. I look forward to starting your book soon.

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  108. I'm reading this for the third time now... Your Christian POV is one of the best Fifty Shades fanfiction I've read!

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  109. I want to read it on my phone. there is no way i can get this it PDF. Good job by the way..

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  110. I have read all three of the books! They were great and I loved all three! I felt the way portrayed Christian help cleared up some things in my mind. For me it helped complete the original books. I look forward to other fanfiction you will have in the future.

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  111. This is perfect!!!! Love it! Thank you! :)

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  112. I love how you have shown us two levels of Christian's feelings for Ana in this chapter -- one level being how much he wants her as a sub and his thoughts about all the superficial trappings that go with it -- and the other, deeper, more subtle level being how he is falling in love with her and is fascinated and so drawn to her in an unconscious, primal way, i.e. the way her hair smells, her honest way of expressing herself, his feeling of confusion and anguish when she leaves. Poor Christian.....he doesn't know what's happening to him!

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  113. DAAMNN! You're good!! It's so refreshing to know Christian's POV! HAHAHHA

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  114. I love the new photo of Ana and Christian!

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  115. Just reread 50 for about the 20th time, and thought I would come and read yours again, but I lost it so I had to ask everyone on fb if they had you link, thank god my neighbour did, loved this the last time, cant wait to reread again, love the new photos and even better then I remembered it, thanks again for writing Christians POV

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    1. Glad you found your way back here, and that you like the new look :) Have you 'liked' my new FB page? The link is on the left of the blog. That way we can keep in touch :)

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    2. yes I have liked your FB page, I have liked a few things on there, Cheryl Oakley, keep up the good work

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  116. I'm a little confused, did you make up these stories from Christian's point of view or did E.L. James write them and you just put them on here? Thank you for your time :)

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    1. This is all my own work, based on E L James' original books.

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  117. How to download the Pdf? :)

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    1. Hi there. Just click on the PDF tab at the top and then follow the instructions :)

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  118. this is your version right? Not the real continued version from the end of Fifty Shades Freed

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